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lisa+pilgrim
27th Aug 2009, 07:50 PM
Hi guys, well archies infection has cleared and its been at least 2 weeks since he came off the antibiotics, so its time to put him up for sale and im useless at doing adverts so, any help would be great.

Hes 4 years old
Full arab out of Aazari (spelling might be wrong)
15.2h, Bay.
Backed a few months ago but since the trailor incident iv just put him out to graze.
Excellent to catch, comes galloping at the sound of the gate being opened.
Good to lead.
Good with farrior, dentist, vet and chiro.
Barefoot
wormed up to date
Brilliant temprement, friendliest guy youll ever find, loves to be fussed all day.
Showed as a yearling and placed.
Microchipped.

and what do you think of these two pics, there from the show that he was placed but as an yearling, all pics i have of him now are from his recovery, is it ok to use a pic thats not recent?

http://i31.tinypic.com/9b9ovp.jpg

http://i25.tinypic.com/14j2a6u.jpg

i will speak to the guy in the pic to see if he minds me using them, so there wont be a blob if i use them in the ad.

many thanks in advance x

ETA...
have found another pic of him from the show, shows him off better, what do you think, unfortunatly he isnt the type to go showing off in the field, and when he does move i keep missing him :rolleyes:

http://i32.tinypic.com/315kfu8.jpg

xRobyn
27th Aug 2009, 07:55 PM
Pictures don't really show him off because the man is in the way. Can you turn him out for a bit of a hoo-ha and get some nice showy-off photos? Or just a nice confo one of him stood up?

lisa+pilgrim
27th Aug 2009, 08:06 PM
will grab my mums camera toomorrow and see what i can get, im crap with moving pics, as there usually either blurred or im missing a head or bum :D

cassiusbaby
27th Aug 2009, 08:16 PM
im not too good at these but have had a go, lol:)

4yr 15.1 bay arab gelding by Aazari.
He was backed a few months back but has been turned away since. Lovely temprement, good to catch and lead. Well behaved with farrier (currently barefoot). Good for vet, dentist, chiro ect. Microchipped and all worming up to date. Loves attention and there's nothing he'd love more than to be fussed all day. No dealers/timewasters, loving home only sought for this gorgeous little chap

:)probs rubbish but hey

lisa+pilgrim
27th Aug 2009, 08:23 PM
im not too good at these but have had a go, lol:)

4yr 15.2 :) bay arab gelding by Aazari.
He was backed a few months back but has been turned away since. Lovely temprement, good to catch and lead. Well behaved with farrier (currently barefoot). Good for vet, dentist, chiro ect. Microchipped and all worming up to date. Loves attention and there's nothing he'd love more than to be fussed all day. No dealers/timewasters, loving home only sought for this gorgeous little chap

:)probs rubbish but hey

that sounds great, i can never seem to write one with everything in it and still make it sound personal, mine just tend to read off like a check list.

cassiusbaby
27th Aug 2009, 08:25 PM
thanks, :)
good luck with finding him a good home

lisa+pilgrim
27th Aug 2009, 08:28 PM
thanks cassius, fingers crossed

lisa+pilgrim
3rd Sep 2009, 09:49 PM
ETA...
have found another pic of him from the show, shows him off better, what do you think, unfortunatly he isnt the type to go showing off in the field, and when he does move i keep missing him :rolleyes:

http://i32.tinypic.com/315kfu8.jpg

lisa+pilgrim
3rd Sep 2009, 11:25 PM
anyone :o :)

lisa+pilgrim
4th Sep 2009, 08:24 AM
bumping:)

cassiusbaby
5th Sep 2009, 06:17 PM
i think thats quite a good pic but maybe you want to include a more natural one, just of him grazing or something. just take the camera down one night and take millions of snaps, then look over them when you get home. i bet there will be some nice pics:)

lauraandharvey
5th Sep 2009, 06:27 PM
alot of adverts ive seen use old pics ;)
but i would get a recent one side on.
is there anyone to ride him for you to get a few pics?
X

lisa+pilgrim
5th Sep 2009, 08:32 PM
thanks guys, i have these of him that are a bit more natural, but have to say the magority of pics i have of him is of his recovery, so there either full of scabs or very ribby, these are the most up todate pics

http://i29.tinypic.com/1o51xe.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/viehvq.jpg

hes only lightly backed, he had two weeks work then was put out to rest after the trailor incident, so i only have this pic of him ridden, not great i know

http://i28.tinypic.com/15ei9tk.jpg

http://i25.tinypic.com/swtzcw.jpg

what about this one, do you think it shows his best side :D

http://i26.tinypic.com/34zn6g6.jpg

cassiusbaby
6th Sep 2009, 06:38 PM
really like the second, third and last pic. the last one shows how cheeky and cute he is:)

lisa+pilgrim
6th Sep 2009, 06:57 PM
i am glad. they were my faviourites too :)