How old are you? I'm guessing about 18? IMO your CV needs to read a little better. For example, tell them about your communication and interpersonal skills, not how friendly you are - they mean the same thing, only one sounds like an educated, mature person and the other sounds a little like a school kid (no offence!!)
Perhaps try something like:
I am a reliable and confident person with excellent communication and interpersonal skills. My line manager at my voluntary work placement describes me as conscientious and mature [this is just an example, ask them what they think of you and quote it] and my college reports have all noted my proven communication skills. I have the ability to work as part of a team and on my own initiative, and my voluntary placement has helped me develop good organisational skills. I enjoy being mentally and physically challenged, and find problem solving particularly fulfilling.
I am interested in furthering my education and will be attending Aberystwyth University from September to study Equine Studies. I am looking forward to having the opportunity to further develop my life skills. Upon completion of the course in 20XX, I intend to pursue a career within the equine industry, and my long term aim is to set up my own business doing XXXXX.
When my study commitments allow it, I am a volunteer at the local veterinary practice [insert the name]. I thoroughly enjoy volunteering here and have gained valuable work experience and the opportunity to develop my interpersonal and communication skills. My role here involves daily care of the animals and interacting with the public. In this setting I have developed the ability to work well under pressure as the surgery was often busy, and also the skills to diffuse potentially confrontational situations [unhappy customers?. I was also involved in call handling, stock ordering/handling, accounting and appointment booking which required me to be organised and use my time efficiently.
I am a keen horse rider and take part in weekly riding lessons. This helps keep me physically fit and healthy, and also gives me the opportunity to work as part of a team to care for the horses. I have also competed in para dressage which I enjoyed. In my spare time I also enjoy crafting felts [is this the correct term?] for friends and family. I hope to develop this hobby in the future and sell my crafts at craft fairs.